And She Moved On

A girl of 18 year old fell in love, Oh! I mean it was an attraction obviously being a teenager, but for her it was a love. She had never looked at any boy in her school, college, on social sites, in real life. The reason is maybe she was finding her so called Prince like in movies -a princess always needs a prince to save her, to love her. She forgot one thing that is she was innocent and didn’t know that there was no love, there was no care, there was no promise, there was only infatuation, there was lust and only lust and she didn’t know that. Great! I’m thinking to clap for her-for her foolishness anyway. I feel sorry for you GIRL once in a blue moon, you were pretty innocent.

Then, they became good friends through texting and calling etc. He never demanded for anything to her and she never expected too. Finally a day came when he proposed to her but she denied and said to him:

My studies are going on, I cannot afford any kind of relationship for now plus I’m still  teenager so my parents will not allow me for this relationship. Please wait for the right time !

He left, and after few months of her exams she came back and proposed to him, He replied:

Sorry you are too late and i’m engaged.

The moment she heard that statement, she was stunned and in a minute left the place without a reply.She messaged to him: why u did this to me ? I promised you, I will back and u said you will wait for me then why u didn’t wait for me ? WHY ? He didn’t reply, she cried a lot for the whole day and night. No body could see her inner pain which she faced because of infatuation to him and called LOVE, ha ha! She fell in depression and started chat and calls through number, social sites etc again. According to you Readers she was so despo, right ? Yes! she was. There was no one to ask from her how’s you feeling now ? There was no one from her family and friends to hug her and says: Everything will be fine relax. 

She involved completely in those activities and didn’t realize her final exams are about to come. She didn’t care so obviously she was blank in her exams and when the result came she failed. She was one of the talented, position holder girl. No one could beaten ( subdue ) her in her class because no body had guts to defeat her.

Her family and friends was blaming to her for not achieving position. There was no one to ask from her calmly why you failed ? Is there any problem ? Being a human we cannot read people mind and heart but yes we can read their faces. Again we ain’t that talented and caring to feel for people and read their faces and ofcourse we don’t have time for bullshits, right ? No body knew that she unrecovered her memory to memorize ( retain ) her lectures of class, to memorize people in her life she met and talked once.

She failed again after an year and faced same comments, reactions from so closed people. However, 3 years passed and she gave her supplementary exams. Later, result came again and she passed. Everyone from her family was happy but not that much when she used to got first position always and she felt that.

She moved on, I know it wasn’t that easy but I can feel it, it wasn’t that difficult too. She started her life again. She struggled a lot and became one of the best daughter, student, friend and the most important-she became the best human being.

She is struggling more and doing hard work to achieve her goals and her reputation in her family and friends, but she doesn’t care and feel for anyone anymore.


We should do care our close one instead of involving in weird activities. We should keep an eye on our friends and family and don’t be lazy to ask from them what is going on in their lives. For a while they feel irritation because of your questions and frankness towards them. Remember what you have to do is ASK and HUG them.


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  1. I don’t want to sound harsh, however I am an English major and I always feel like constructive criticism helps people to better themselves in their writing.

    When writing, be careful of your upper and lower cases (losing an I and writing i is a very elementary mistake); love is not countable, it can neither be counted nor multiplied, it just is; “to do care of her” – someone can either take care of you or do well by you, it can never be a mix of the two; “to become good friends” does not need or appreciate words like of, to, etc. you either become each others’ friends, become a good friend of hers or become a goof friend of theirs, the sentiment cannot be returned; you are still a teenager, or are in the prime of your life, you are not in a teen age of your life; she proposed TO him, abbreviates are needed in situations such as this; do not forget there is ALWAYS a space after a comma; I feel like you wanted to say she did not come at the right time, therefore she is TOO late, not late: someone can be late to a party, but if they missed the window of opportunity they are too late; without A reply, writing ANY in the sentence leaves the sentence with a double negative which is a huge no-no in the English language; etc.

    Anyway, the concept of the post is well received, however you still have to work on your grammar quite a lot. And again, I do not want to sound harsh, however I do hope you appreciate this post and learn from it (might I say even grow from this experience).

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    1. Thank you so much for your honest corrections, and I meant it.I’m glad that the people like you still exist in this world to correct such kind of blunders like I did. I’m working on it and will improve 🙂


  2. Until I started meeting more and more people, talk to people, I would have thought the story seemed impossible and yet, I know it has happened already to some I talked to.

    The question is, what are we, readers of this post, going to do about it? I say take lessons from this story and be sensitive to people we care about. We cannot have a relationship with another person (family or friend) from our perspective. We have to see it the other way too.

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  3. I think this happens to wear people. If you know what your goals are and to know what motivates you, you should never drop everything for a man. Never! First comes the financial independence, and only then it comes the time for playing around with love.

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  4. Sad but true. This story happens almost to every girl. Seriously. Being heart broken is tough, for sometime the world will seem like it is ending and one doesn’t realize how much of time they actually are wasting. But it is never too late.


  5. Its hard to get over a broken heart. Only time heals it. Something else I learned was that you can’t expect anyone else to “fix” you, whether it be another person or your family. They’re there to take care of you but you have to learn to grow stronger for yourself.


  6. Getting through the end of a love relationship is very hard it is for sure the most difficult think I had to experience in my life !


  7. Is this someone you know personally or a parable? I am sorry that the man she loved did not wait for her but it goes to show she was able to pass in the end and move on with her life, even if it took three years.


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